The 2 biggies are unclear use of pronouns and in literary analysis always use the present tense. Also capitalize all words in the title.

In the essay, “A Very Old Man With Enormous Wings,” the main character, Pelayo, and his wife find a man with wings in a coop [unclear modifier: does the man have wings or was the man and the wings 2 objects? Consider revising]. Later, they [who?] realize the old man is an angel.
Pelayo’s family decides to show the angel in the coop to the villagers, and they charge 5 cents admission. While the angel is on display, everyone [who?] pays attention to old man-angel. However, everyone’s attention turned to [the or a] spider-girl who had turned into a tarantula one night after disobeying her parents. This appeals to the masses more than an old winged-man who ignores the people around him. Pelayo builds a mansion with all the money he has accumulated. They [who?] neglect the angel and prevent their [who?] child from getting to close to the chicken coop. When the chicken coop breaks, Pelayo allows the angel to move into the house. The angel is sick, so Pelayo and his wife fear the angel will die. But, the old man-angel flies away.

This is my fourth winter with chickens. I have 20 in each coop. The coop I built this summer is greater as my first and I was wondering if I should put an extra heat lamp there for the winter. I live in Ohio, with winter nighttime temps are above 33 degrees mild, rarely colder. My older birds are there, they are 2 and 3 years old. I only use the lamp in the coop to help others, the water from freezing, but it helps warm coop, because cooperation is small. Thank you both for responding. I thought about the same. I wonder whether there are other people on the program, the poultry is raised. I wanted to add, "Rusty Oldma, I eat my pets," would make but oh my, what is missing for the back, lol. Which color you use for heat lamps. Red or white, and why? I'm about a white inside, red with thinking. In this way, the girls have the Choice. Cool?

I live in Ohio and, if the winter is pretty cold. My father and I had a huge coop that 12 (W) * 24 (L) * 7 (H) built so its pretty big. We have a home-made home for my chickens and ducks usually go in. I had straw in it and if it begins to snow, we have a lamp in it. My ducks are really the one who uses it, but also some of my chickens. I also have a nesting box and a district that goes from one end to another (they love definitely to sleep) and of corse food and water. The water freezes, so that we, the thermal waterers that allow them freeze, dont get. Well, you only need prbably should them with a fine.

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